Comparing Version 12 to Version 13:
Comments:
I'm confused by the mention of 'two Ushios'. As I understand it, one has been wandering in the sea since trying to rescue Shiori, and would have appeared at the festival (as in loop 3) if she hadn't been found in the Kii strait. But where will the other one come from? Things are so wacky with Shadows and looping that couldn't there be up to <i>ten</i> Ushios? Likewise, I had thought Shide had a spare <i>body</i>, but it seems he has both two bodies and two minds--he's not a Shadow, but was a Shadow of him created at some point? Again, all the hard work, sacrifice and courage of Shin and his friends falls just short of complete victory and a new problem they must overcome appears.
