Comparing Version 5 to Version 6:
Synopsis:
Junichi's class representative, a hard worker and willing to take on any task that no one else will. While she acts kind and friendly, it is actually a facade that secretly hides the real her who is <spoiler>manipulative and cunning</spoiler>.
Having learned her true nature but being committed to work together, Jun'ichi faces tough times. Which kind of character do we need for this to be plausible? Jun'ichi's <b>depressed</b> self, the variant who's hit so hard by that Christmas date failure two years ago that he still hasn't recovered fromthis.this, so that he actually enjoys working away like may.
The problematic part of this arc is Tsukasa: Why would she ever fall for Jun'ichi? This needs a long development and a thorough explanation, and <spoiler>the arc has to make up its lack of consistency by a rollercoaster development with dramatic turns, then ending in the "full happy ending - 10 years later" mode again</spoiler>.
Having learned her true nature but being committed to work together, Jun'ichi faces tough times. Which kind of character do we need for this to be plausible? Jun'ichi's <b>depressed</b> self, the variant who's hit so hard by that Christmas date failure two years ago that he still hasn't recovered from
The problematic part of this arc is Tsukasa: Why would she ever fall for Jun'ichi? This needs a long development and a thorough explanation, and <spoiler>the arc has to make up its lack of consistency by a rollercoaster development with dramatic turns, then ending in the "full happy ending - 10 years later" mode again</spoiler>.
Comments:
the arc doesn't fully and credibly deliver both; the scene where she burned the note book came out of nothing, and even when she tried to "delete" her old self it could still have been an act.
